You still need to work hard, there is no rhythm of life. AI middle school entrance exam essay with the same topic | Chinese language teacher's review: Seemingly organized Fudan University | Huang Yufeng | Composition
[Editor's note]
On June 17th, 2023, the Shanghai high school entrance examination will begin. The 600 word essay titled "The Joy of Understanding" has once again sparked public interest both inside and outside the candidate's family. Essay questions, whether difficult or not; If it were you, how would you write it?
In this era of booming artificial intelligence, the issue of essay writing in college entrance exams may be approached from a machine perspective. Jiefang Daily · Shangguan News has invited major domestic generative pre training large models to write essays on the same topic on multiple AI platforms, and invited relevant experts from various fields to comment on how these robots understand natural language in the "simulation test". Has the writing skills surprised humans? How exactly is it written? Let's learn and learn from each other.
This morning, the 2023 Shanghai High School Entrance Examination Chinese composition question was unveiled, titled "The Joy of Understanding". Can the artificial intelligence big language model accurately review questions? How is the writing level? The Jiefang Daily Shangguan News reporter inputted the title into the iFlytek Spark Big Model, which quickly generated an article according to the requirements. Huang Yufeng, the principal of Shanghai Fudan Wupuhui Experimental School and a top-level Chinese language teacher, believes that the article is dry, uninteresting, and lacks emotion. If he were to score it, he would definitely fail it. What do you think?
The Joy of Understanding
In life, we always encounter things that make us feel happy. These things may not be eye-catching, but they can make us feel incredibly happy and satisfied. This is the so-called "joy of understanding".
The pleasure of understanding does not refer to material enjoyment, but to a spiritual pleasure. It stems from our understanding and comprehension of life, as well as our understanding and care for others. When we can understand the truth from learning and life, or when we have no clear meaning for others, we will have a deep sense of satisfaction and happiness.
For example, in learning, when we master a new knowledge or skill, there will be a sense of achievement and pride surging in our hearts. This feeling comes not only from one's own efforts and dedication, but also from understanding and comprehending knowledge. When we are able to apply the knowledge we have learned to practical life and solve practical problems, we also feel an immense sense of satisfaction and happiness.
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In addition, in interactions with others, there are also many heartfelt pleasures. For example, when we can understand the thoughts and feelings of others, provide them with support and care, we will feel a deep sense of satisfaction and happiness. This feeling comes not only from one's own kindness and empathy, but also from respect and understanding towards others.
In addition, there are some seemingly insignificant small things that can also bring us joy of understanding. For example, seeing a kitten dozing in the sunlight, hearing a moving music, tasting a delicious food, and so on. These small things, although inconspicuous, can bring us immense pleasure and satisfaction.
In short, the pleasure of understanding is a spiritual pleasure and satisfaction. It stems from our understanding and comprehension of life, as well as our understanding and care for others. Whether in learning or interacting with others, as long as we can understand and care for others, we can generate a deep sense of satisfaction and happiness. Let us cherish every moment of heartfelt pleasure and make them the most beautiful memories in our lives.
Expert comments
Huang Yufeng
After all, articles written by robots are dry and uninteresting, without emotions or body temperature! It can reason dry, seemingly organized, without lively content or the rhythm of life. For example, "in addition", "in addition", "in short", it can be boring. Reading such an article is equivalent to not reading it.
The most important thing about the joy of understanding is to write about one's own personal experience. Not to interpret this topic, nor to discuss the connotation of "knowing the heart and enjoying it". Even interpreting or discussing the connotation of "the joy of understanding" in this machine article is not qualified. If I were to give a score, I would definitely fail it. It seems that you still need to work hard!